Kate Ter Haar, "Examining Clouds" taken on April 12, 2012 via Flickr Attribution Generic 2.0
From performing the paragraph analysis on my rough draft, I learned about what my paragraphs are strong in and what they lack. Generally, I do a really good job focusing on and developing the main point of the paragraph. What I need to work on is linking ideas and transitioning from one idea to the next in a paragraph. I have difficulties transitioning, making my paragraphs come across as somewhat choppy when they are being read by the reader. To view my paragraph analysis click HEREEEE!!
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