This exercise helped me understand where I am lacking in my QRG draft and where I am demonstrating strength in my QRG. I have done a good job exploring the main ideas of the sections/paragraphs of my QRG. I develop the main idea well and I can focus on the main idea without getting off topic too much. I need to work on my transitions and linking the ideas together better. I also need to organize the paragraphs better on the interior. I have an organized paper overall but each paragraph individually could be structured better. A way to do this would be to utilize a PIE paragraph structure.
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